First of all....I think you may have mis-read some of the comments Archie....no one here has said anything was "wrong" with it (unless someone PMd you, which I would therefore be unaware of)...and I'm not sure why you added your "morality police" comment......so there's no reason to get all defensive

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Overall I liked it though! In my opinion, act 2 was wwwaaaay too long....but the payoff was nice and unpredictable.
My main 2 problems with it were that a) there are a couple of spelling/gramatical errors in your subtitles....but that's not a big deal.
b) I had to watch the "contraption" scene several times before I saw that there was a thread/wire above the last candle....I'm not sure how I personally would have fixed that since I don't know much about lighting for film etc.....but it would have been nice if that whole thing was made a little more clear, because the few very fast cuts where the contraption goes off were too fast and too soon for me to grasp what was going on.
Overall quite enjoyable though

....and creepy! lol