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The Factory
Office Space
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06 Aug 2006I just finally decided to render out the last room that I had done, and I know it needs to be tweaked, so I wanted to get your guys opinion on this pic so I can get it done and put it in the vault. I almost forgot, Tyson modelled the laptop, so credit goes to him on that.
let me know what you guys think!
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06 Aug 2006Other than a mouse for the laptop all looks very sweet...............
very nice......
The chair to the right looks a bit hard.......not something I would sit on.
great lookig pic.
kilroy -
06 Aug 2006uh.... which part is CG?
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g3org3 355 posts07 Aug 2006Definately your best room that I have seen to date.
A few crits. Like with the other one the outside should probaly be blown out more.(Speaking of outside where is that pciture from? It looks like Greece or something like that). The material on the plant pots looks very fake and flat.
Also is that a rug underneath the chiar? If so it looks like hit has no thickness at all. -
08 Aug 2006Ok, I made some changes, who can spot them?!?
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ALi 608 posts08 Aug 2006wow, you're a wizard!
what happened with that chair
I like that shiny sky too. how you did that?
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g3org3 355 posts08 Aug 2006Ok changes I see:
No more silver chair
The brightness of the lights is lower
The carpet now has more thickness
The flower pots have more specular to them
The picture is Zoomed in more and is more over blown.
There might be more but nonetheless it is a great improvement. -
08 Aug 2006
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ALi 608 posts08 Aug 2006
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