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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts07 Sep 2006hi guys i have been working on my first actual site that i might even buy a domain for this is my site link i need full comments on it and speed connection issues if any gets i also would love loads of comments on the design if its good or not and so for the intro animation thanks all
LINK:
http://mahmoudnahmad.eqquhost.com
http://mahmoudnahmad.eqquhost.com/index.html (incase the upper one doesnt work)
IF LINK IS NOT WORKING PLEASE SAY SO so i can fix thanks and enjoy crits and commenting it!!
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07 Sep 2006Nice start but the circle of your antena are blurrywhile the rest is nice and sharp, if I can give you an advice if you want to promote yourself as a Graphic artist, show you are one and be very meticulous.
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts07 Sep 2006thanks for ur crits working on the blur issue right now and thats for the vocab u just added to my dictionary hehe loved it u think i should add anything else or is it enough?
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07 Sep 2006Might want to consider purchasing your own Domain, or at least a get a host. Nothing bugs employers more than an obtrusive ad.
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts07 Sep 2006thanks for the adive mike but i am going to buy one just waiting to make the site really good then i will get my .com can u also if u dont mind direct me to a good domain seller and hoster thanks in advance
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ALi 608 posts07 Sep 2006Hi Mahmoud. Good start as I said before.
My only crits now is to change the background color to white, and make images smoother. in some parts they are pixelated.
keep us posted.
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts07 Sep 2006ali u mean the entire back black area?
and one more thing i added u to my msn hope to see u online soon -
mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts07 Sep 2006ok working on ur adivce ali for every one site is under construction for 5 to 10 min
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts07 Sep 2006site back up ali is this what u where thinking off ( incase u dont see changes just right click any where and hit reload to see the changed)
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07 Sep 2006Keep your site simple but esteticaly nice, otherwise give it personal touch it will help people know who you are.
I'm no site expert myself but been working on mine in the past weeks (learn flash at the same time) and that's what I did simple, estetic and personal touch, but it's not fully operational yet. -
ALi 608 posts07 Sep 2006Yes. it now looks much better. but images are not smooth yet. speially for tv bakground image antena. a little amount of blur should fix it.
And here is my last gripe.
I think if the background color of flash animation be white it would be better. it bothers me now. ( but don't mind if you want to keep this. it's just my idea. )
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts07 Sep 2006ALIII AND REST UPDATEEEEEE!!!! now our dull tv anitena is going live i added a signal anmation between the two electrods if thats what they call them crits and comments please
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ALi 608 posts07 Sep 2006it's almost ok now.
One thing I noticed when browsing your website is that for example if you want to go from one page to another one (ie: form 3d gallery to 2d gallery) you can't do it directly. you have to back main menu and then select the page you want. I guess may be the back and next button are for solving this problem. are they?
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