Gallery + Critique

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Richard
1,943 posts

07 Sep 2006
hey all,

i decided to make an animation this week end, well, starting now, to improve my animation skills,

here is the clip, it from the benchwarmers

http://www.moviewavs.com/php/sounds/?id ... hurtme.wav

and here is my progress so far,nevermind the clip reapeting at the begenning and at the end, it wont be there in the final animation

http://www.richardadenot.com/stuff/obprev01.mov

btw, thanks T, the modifs you made are really nice, waiting for some more
zachm
1,230 posts

07 Sep 2006
looks good at this point, I don't have much crits on the animation, seeing as I am not an animator, but the camera is maybe a bit too abrupt. Try easing into it a bit, that usually helps with the smash zoom. If you already had that planned, then disregard this message.

-Z
Global
1,589 posts

07 Sep 2006
Agree with Z re. the camera, it is rather abrupt. As for the animation, well... there's not a lot to crit right now, but the blink looks and he comes across as being quite hesitant (so if that's what you intended, you're on the right track)