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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts22 Sep 2006hi guys i am working on a small story which will be an animation and i want your guidance and help along the way THANKS.
can you please C&C this small walk
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22 Sep 2006I cant view it
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22 Sep 2006hey, very nice! looked like he was a little nervous about taking that step.
dude, you are just cranking stuff out all the time! -
22 Sep 2006not bad.
his shoes feet look a little floppy, and he bobs up and down way to much. a good walk cycle also has a lot to do with hips arms and shoulders, you should try using the whole body to give it a realistic feel. -
mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts22 Sep 2006thanks nux and hype
-nux : ofcourse i am going to use the hole body its wip so its not finished and for the legs and you will also notic that in the second wip i try to press on antisipation alot so i tend to make things look too floppy or maybe mess some stuff but cause this is my first learn animation i never did this hole body before and as a matter of fact i never did a walk cycle
ANY WAY MORE C&C GUYS and this is the link for the second wip thanks!!!
LINK: http://mahmoudahmad.com/vids/02.avi
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