Gallery + Critique

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Denny
179 posts

24 Feb 2007
This is my second attempt at a character study using a more complex rig I built.

There are 2 shots to the piece, but I haven't rendered out the 2nd shot yet. There are suppose to be 2 paintings in the background, but I didnt notice there weren't loaded until about frame 500 or so

I don't know exactly what is going on with the lighting, cause there is some discoloration on his face and its seems blown out, help!

Warning: For Language

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-6wZbQkmwk
whaaabamb
615 posts

24 Feb 2007
good start man its really dark. darker than i remeber when we where working on it in class but thats probly youtube being dumb and that the screens at school are crappy. but its looking good more secondary motion and a few time the motion seems to lag a bit.

but good start for sure keep it up
Denny
179 posts

24 Feb 2007
yea, I especially notice it being too dark when the light gets knocked off the table.
Global
1,589 posts

24 Feb 2007
I think we should have an obscenity warning on that one. Not saying I'm offended, but this forum is open to those of all ages.

I think I'd say the same as I did in your other recent post. This one looks a little more polished - the gesture at the start looks ok... but needs more weight. But as the guy gets angry it just looses it and the gestures look more random, all the action is in the arms but the body is very stiff.

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