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whaaabamb 615 posts
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ivanisavich 4,196 posts
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whaaabamb 615 posts
thanks T
got a bit of an update tried to fix some of the stuff you mentioned
let me know what you think
and feel free to rip it apart cause i know it needs work.
http://joegarhan.com/movies/test2.mov
thanks
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kilroy 787 posts
Got new pc's at work no quick alowed.bummer
look at at home...darn I wanted to see this one.
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whaaabamb 615 posts
Aww man thats no good why no quick time?
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Hey! lookin' really good and I like the motion a lot!
Tyson was talking about how the motion stops after he lands on the roof, and I saw how you fixed that, and it did help. But it looks unrealistic there because his body stops moving. After that much motion, he would have a lot of momentum, and I don't think he could stop like that. Try doing a fast roll yourself, and see how your body carries through. So I would make him stumble and catch himself after he comes up as he is running. Does that make sense?
Looking really good though! I'm quite impressed.
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JayG 1,164 posts
The reversal in his spine after his first jump i think happens a few frames too early. If you offset that just a few (2-3) frames ahead it would make it look more natural. Right now it's very jerky when he leaps and it would smooth it out a lot slowing it down. If you have more than one spine control that would also be a nice place for some overlapping action. Also when he lands the huge first leap his spine should be overlapping as his weight comes down. But again, hopefully you have more than one spine control so you can do that stuff.
Another thing, this is a technical nitpick coming from a gymnast, but it will make it look way more natural. Right before the second jump, he does a small leap onto the ledge before he jumps. That's called a hurdle. When you hurdle you need to keep your center of gravity low and make it nice and long. The arc of the hurdle needs to be very low and very long in order to generate power. The other way around (high but short arc) doesn't work at all and will actually make you jump less as it kills your momentum. So...if you can somehow without having to reblock that whole run, make him hurdle from farther back and have it not arc up so much it will look awesomely better.
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whaaabamb 615 posts
