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The Factory
Quinns Acrobatic Animation
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quinn paynter 356 posts25 May 2007 -
25 May 2007
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quinn paynter 356 posts25 May 2007
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25 May 2007
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quinn paynter 356 posts26 May 2007
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quinn paynter 356 posts28 May 2007Just working on forward momentum problem that was found.... but no ones watching so who cares
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28 May 2007Well I'm trying to watch bro...but I keep getting that codec error! (weird that I didn't get it on the file you sent over msn).
I'm assuming other people are having the same problem, hence the lack of comments -
28 May 2007Im having trouble too even my VLC player wont play it
well i could see it for a bit but it was real flashy and sometimes wont work
what i saw looks sweet and i wanna see more -
29 May 2007Well I can see it.
I feel reluctant to comment on things I can't do myself, but here goes anyway:
-When he anticipates his jump, I'd speed it up a bit. The movements are great btw.
-When he "jumps" away from the pole and flies to the next roof (roughly between frame 60-80) he moves very fast. When an object goes up it gradually loses momentum until it reaches its high point, then it gains momentum again as it falls down. (as you know better than me: the bouncing ball kind of thing) Your guy doesn't really have that, he seems to move at the same speed.
-When he jumps on the boxes, I *think* the followthrough is too slow. I would expect him to go through his knees faster as it is quite a big leap he takes.
-Were you planning on adding in some pole movement? That'd be cool
I really like it btw. -
29 May 2007Agree with Jake - I couldn't frame by frame, but looks like too much spacing as guy takes off from that swing on the pole.
The swing is pretty nice though - very good display of weight
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