Gallery + Critique

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Richard
1,943 posts

04 Oct 2007
hey there guys... i am back in the field, with my first maya model!
well, this is my second model actualy... my first one was a box... (ask iest, he'll tell you all about it)

so here i am asking for suggestions and ideas to improve this little guy...

so feel free to crit!
Claymation
600 posts

04 Oct 2007
Looks fine so far. What are you going to do with it? Is it supposed to be pulled by a person or by an animal? How is the top half connected to the wheels/axel?

Only thing I'd like to see would be some sort of indentation or grips or something on the ends of the handles.
JayG
1,164 posts

04 Oct 2007
Looks solid man. Maybe some nicks and cracks in the wheels? Those things took a serious beating.
zachm
1,230 posts

04 Oct 2007
yeah man, it looks great, the only suggestion I have to make it better is just a bit more detail. Everything is very uniform right now. I'd add some knicks and stuff as was mentioned, and maybe have just a bit of uneven-ness where edges meet, and that sort of thing to break it up a bit. It was built by hand after all.

-Z
JayG
1,164 posts

04 Oct 2007
tkkstar
18 posts

10 Oct 2007
Home, home on the range, where the.... oops wrong post.

I would like to suggest some bumping some polys on the upper frame work and wood handles. It could could be cool to see some holes in the wood siding. Even making the wagon lean toward one side with one loose looking wheel. All in all its a good start.