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whaaabamb 615 posts
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kilroy 787 posts
wow you got some nice work there. I know when I look at a persons reel I like to see some "How I did it" in there. maybe some rigging passes breakdowns, stuff like that. I think it will look a lot better too once you get some background music in there. Nice work man.
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whaaabamb 615 posts
Hey kilroy thanks man!
here is an update, its put together much better and i took out the lift and push shot
http://www.joegarhan.com/test_reel2.mov
I think this order works but if any of you think otherwise please let me know!
thanks a bunch guys
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Claymation 600 posts
Hey Joe, some good stuff! Personally I think you start and end with your two weakest pieces. I think you could still keep them in, just not where they are. I would maybe start with either the second clip, or the jack-in-the-box one.
I might end it with the pool one. It's different than all the others and includes text at the end which might tie in better with any additional text (personal information) you'd have at the end. And it's really cool.
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whaaabamb 615 posts
hey thanks for the input mate
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BColbourn 2,323 posts
i actually dont like the pool one. i know i should be critiquing the reel and not the individual parts but the lighting in the pool shots felt really amateur, in the sense is that all it looks like you did was throw a skylight in there and let global illumination do the rest. other than that there's nothing i caught that someone else hasnt already(i do agree with the starting and ending, being the weakest)
ps: what kind of music are you going to put with this?
