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JayG 1,164 posts
It's a bit of a mess at the moment but I thought I'd show my progress on this one. Don't really need any crits quite yet unless you see something really horrible, I just wanted to get it out here because it's awesome. =)
Edit: See Below.
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JayG 1,164 posts
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ivanisavich 4,196 posts
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JayG 1,164 posts
Thanks for the crits man, didn't even notice he was looking at the knife, he isn't suppose to be. >< Though his angle sort of prevents him from looking correctly without rekeying his entire position. I wanted his head turned enough to see both his pupils, and lose a little angle in doing so.
Here is the "final" version for school. I'll probably get in there for some more facial polish eventually, then a render at some point.
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Richard 1,943 posts
i am not a good animator to crit that peice of work, to me this looks great!
how loong did you work on this in the end?
it seems the lip sinc is a bit off at some point, and you could make some mouth mouvement snapier at some points (when he says houkideska for example... that "a" feels late and slow) imo, you should move the whole sound track by a frame or two so that is starts a little earlyer and see how that works
my fav parts are around frame 300 when the guys goes down and hide beheind the bar with the knife and that big move around frame 112
anyhow, great work there!
