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The Factory
Made in idia - India that is :P
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06 May 2008hey all,
i did not want to post this before it's complete, but hey, what the heck...
we had to make an animation that is going on in idia and that was no longer than 15 seconds....
and i came up with that story:
a kid is making soccer balls, loads of them, for big industries outside india. While he works, a bell rings, it announces that the day is over. He then stops making these new ballons and grabs his old own ballon, stares it and looks happy with it... The kid then runs outside to play with it.
pretty simple but hey, how can things get more complicated under 15 seconds!
we are five on it... (way too much imo)
i storyboarded, made the layout, modeled the balls, room, kid's head and most of the body while a friend made the colthes and hairs.
An other friend did textures and artworks.
i did the shading, lighting and rendering.
Yet an other friend and I are currently animating.
(there is the last guy working with us that hardly does anything... he doesn't even bring beer or coffee)
here is what i have at the moment:
the kid (with untextured pants and soccer ball:
a wip of the room:
i'll post animations as i get them...
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06 May 2008wow this look damn good i love the room its right what i was thinking of
(very good lightening) the model is very neat but the hand and fingers look a little weird even for a toon character they are a little to big it would be nicher when he had little hands that would make him a bit more fragile. -
mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts07 May 2008awesome lighting -
07 May 2008"the model is very neat but the hand and fingers look a little weird even for a toon character they are a little to big"
thx for pointing this out! i will not be able to change this now since the character is rigged and textured and all... (although i should be able to modify this by making a blendshape, i really, really don't feel like it... i'm at that point, where i feel sick about the anim, and i don't want to see it any longer)
i totaly agree that by making smaller fingers it would make him look more fragile. and it would indeed look much nicher, whatever that is
and thx for the comments you two, made last night worth it i think i still have a few things to take care of on it though, and probably make it a touch brighter since it is going to be projected...
here is a blast of shot 1... crits are welcome, although i might not have time to change it, unless it really is necessary... cause i need to make the 4 other ones first...
http://www.richardadenot.com/simplycg/F ... blast1.mov -
07 May 2008hey rich, dunno how i didnt see this before. it looks great! really like the character so far, very nice exaggerations and overall style. also, the room you have is awesome, really like the camera angle you've done too.
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