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Gallery + Critique
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The Factory
may 11 sec club wip
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JonyK 42 posts -
JonyK 42 posts03 Jun 2008?
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03 Jun 2008Hey mate....well it's difficult to critique since the actual character animation basically ends during the whisper...but here are some comments about the beginning:
-don't forget to add in moving holds! you never want your characters to completely freeze
-the eyebrow motion is much too basic....it looks more like the motion you'd see on a robot or something , as if there's a little servo motor in his head turning them. also try to make them more asymmetrical
-don't forget to animate his neck, etc -
JonyK 42 posts04 Jun 2008thank you tyson.. I worked on it a lot and I'll post an update..
When I watched the play back I noticed these things as well.. it was very... smooth.. for a lack of a better word..
So, i'll see what i can do.. thanks man!
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