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Cobra_Commander 9 posts19 Jan 2006This is my first character animation piece, how is this (aside from the wonky camera,, just to get the basic movement captured)
what needs to be fixed and how if you can...
thanks alot
(oh sorry i dont have a website so i just posted it in one of those savefile.com
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19 Jan 2006For a first attempt at charater animation this looks very promising. It is very stiff, but it looks like you have the idea of anticipation and follow through motion... though it's a little difficult to tell with that whizzing camera! hehe (I think that would be the first thing I changed in this anim)
One thing that looked particularly bad is the mid air roll (I think because the legs were straight out, not tucked in - so it didn't look very natural)
Keep going though - it's all about practice
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