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Richard 1,943 posts
here is my first interior i made... it is still a WIP, i will add one heater, two tables etc...
what do you think about it?
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Goul 246 posts
A bit empty still now, but it's a great start
I really love the armchair.
Windows looks like hole, you should had a decent glass materials to them
Keep it up
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iest_rob 1,671 posts
HEy - yeah i really like the couch, the cushons are really well made!
Looking forward seeing more items in the room - also i agree with Goul, add some nice window material, that would be great.
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Cameron 2,374 posts
Yeah I love how the chair has come out. Rest of the scene however is very empty as already mentioned and yeah something has to be done with that window.
What renderer?
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Global 1,589 posts
Very nicely lit with a very warm feeling to it. The chair is great and I like the design of the rug. But that window and the background really spoils it at the mo :s
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ivanisavich 4,196 posts
I think everything is lit fantastically mate....not sure about the way those pillows are looking (the ruffles look very unnatural) but everything else is looking suberb.
Fill that scene up with some more furniature etc and you'll have a winner!
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Richard 1,943 posts
thx for the comment... the windos look like that because i havn't worked on it yet... and the backgrout is there because i still havn't modeled the exerior... here is a new update:
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iest_rob 1,671 posts
Hey man - the table is really nice, i think that the heater might be a bit too big - maybe 1/2 the size would be better? Otherwise, looking really good man, i like your wood material.
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amer 60 posts
something wrong with the general scale of th elements...couch too big for the wall...table too big for the rug..windows too big for the roof height...and the side lamp is just too small...
lighting and materials are great though!
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Richard 1,943 posts
thx again for the crits... i'll try doing my best to fix all the things you told me about... never the less, here is an other update:
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Richard 1,943 posts
OMG, the pic of my wip is in the bar up there... What an honour!!!! now i guess it means i gotta keep up with it...
i'll work on the windows and the laptop tonight... as for the heater, should I put 2 below eatch windos or leave that big one?
and tyson, you are right, i will work on them pillows...
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ivanisavich 4,196 posts
Yea this is shaping up really nicely so I figured you deserved a plug
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Richard 1,943 posts
cool, thx.
anyway here is an update, i'll work on the laprop tonight, and the cussions. i have on problem though, i have no idea of what pic i could use for the outside... any idea anyone?
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ant- 73 posts
great stuff,
as for your background pic, i dont like the earlier one as it appears at the wrong angle, and is too dark, its a matter of camera exposure, your room is lit heavily from the outside, but the room is correctly exposed, this tells me that the exposure is balenced for the inside, therefore your exterior will be over exposed, i did a quick search on image after, this is the best example i could find
http://www.imageafter.com/image.php?ima ... ors001.jpg
look at the superbright windows,
i did have a quick look on imageafter for an actual image that could just be brightened up, but the angle is a difficult one, its sort of downwards slightly, you could always defocus the outside...
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Richard 1,943 posts
here is a quick update:
didn't have time to do the laptop or the cushons because i had my spanish exam today, so i had to go to bed early...
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Goul 246 posts
owww i really love the way it turns out...Nice update.
The heater is definetly better, and the windows too.
The background image fit better than the previous one..
Keep up the good work
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iest_rob 1,671 posts
Yeah man - this is looking really good! I agree with the heater - much better now. ant- mentioned a good point about the outside pic, i think it works much better now.
The only thing im not shure about is the reflection in the right hand side window - not shure if this would happen on a nice sunny day like you've got here?
Otherwise - excelletn stuff!
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Global 1,589 posts
Heh - and you said you were going to 'give up' on 3D for a year... This is great, with noticable improvements every post.
I agree with the comment about the reflection in the window (I don't think you would see the rooms interior that clearly) The ackground is much much better, as is the heater.
I really like the painting on the wall too (almost seems a shame to put it behind glass!)
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Richard 1,943 posts
here is a final version... Now i'll just improve it from your crits... so go on and tell me all you want...
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Goul 246 posts
you should maybe put some auto-illumination on the laptop screen
Exept thats, that's ok for me
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iest_rob 1,671 posts
Nice man - really looking good.
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Todd 84 posts
Hey man,
I agree with Tyson. The lighting is fantastic! The only thing that's really throwing my off at the moment is the laptop screen. The image on the screen doesn't seem to fit the environment. Also it seems a little too bright for me. When i view my LCD screen from the side it's definately not bright at all.
Other than that mate im loving it!
Cheers,
~Todd.
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amer 60 posts
as a Cg artist, i tell you it's good. as an architect, i tell you its lousy! ok, in fear of you misunderstanding me im going to put it in lame terms...
your materials and lighting are simply amazing..yet your sense of scale is very immature!
i understand this is your first attempt, and thats the only reason why im tryin to help you. Focus on measurements and units above all... go to your max preferences, choose a unit form youre familiar with (NEVER work with generic units), and get some background knowledge in architectural measurements and standards.
your image could be simply amazing if only you could solve your scale problems!
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jigu 90 posts
hey nice job!!
Final image is looking gr8!!
waht renderer u used?
Keep up the good work.
-jigu.
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Richard 1,943 posts
hey guys, thx for the comments...
amer, i'll take care of that in may next project, i'll get the proportions right...
jugi, i used vray for it...
wow , i cant beleive it, my pic got a plug here , its in the gallery of 3dkingdom.org and i don't know about 3dtotal yet... thx you all guys for the crits, and i'll keep in touch for my futur creations...
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luke 216 posts
because i didn't comment as this pwice developeed i will comment now.. awesome, it inspires me to do something, but i dunno what or how i would go about it
