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flashmasterfong 238 posts03 Jul 2006
I'm in! -
flashmasterfong 238 posts04 Jul 2006Ok heres my sound clip, from a Few Good Men
Is this good enough? -
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ALi 608 posts04 Jul 2006 -
flashmasterfong 238 posts05 Jul 2006Ok I did this last night.
Tell me what you think so far. -
ALi 608 posts05 Jul 2006Very Nice! I like your lipsync and emotional hand moves.
Although, I have two points. First when the "Blue" shouts "I want the truth!" it doesn't really seems shouting. and another one that when "Orange" says "you can't handle the truth." he blinks unusualy. -
flashmasterfong 238 posts07 Jul 2006Ok guys, just a little update.
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ALi 608 posts07 Jul 2006you may play with faces to be more emotional. on eyebrows and eyelids for example. however it's pretty good.
and one note about lighting. room is very lit. but the faces are dark. using two lights with far attenuation setting and also adding some materials may improve it much. (light green walls don't make a correct sense.)
It's coming along nicely. waiting for your updates. -
11 Jul 2006i like it.
the lipsync is good, only so much you can do with a hinged jaw, and with that you've done really well!
the only thing i can think to crit is the body movements. they seem too stiff, there needs to be more secondary motion, action reaction type stuff.
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