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Anticipation : Quinn Paynter
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quinn paynter 356 posts16 Feb 2006Was thinking up some ideas, ill try come up with something more creative but this is something I quickly whipped up so far. Any crits would be nice, though it aint done, just a quick test. Cheers.
http://media.putfile.com/Jump-that-wall
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16 Feb 2006Hey man - it's looking good, the only crit i'd have is for the start, when he's looking around, try not to squash him as much for this part, and just as he's about to jump, squash away!
Hope this help man
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quinn paynter 356 posts16 Feb 2006Hey man. Yeah thanx, thats a good point. By making the look around too stretched it does take away from the "EXTREMETY" of the jump stretch. Thanks for the heads up
And congrats on the last comp, if you read this b4 we talk on MSN -
17 Feb 2006cant view the file,,
can you not put up somewhere where i can save the file using save as?
cheers,
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17 Feb 2006Thanks Quinn!
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17 Feb 2006I can't see the file either...
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quinn paynter 356 posts17 Feb 2006For those who cant see my vid try getting it from here.
http://www.yourfilelink.com/get.php?fid=27719
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17 Feb 2006Ahhhh. now I can see it
good idea! A few things that stand out to me are:
-you're loosing volume when he squishes down... maybe try to scale him outwards?
-In 2d animation, stretches like you have should be felt rather than seen... try having a stretch for fewer frames, even 1 or 2 frames.. that might do the trick a smear should be a drawing between 2 poses that are far appart
-His landing looks a little floaty... try increasing the distance between each drawing to make it faster on the come down
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17 Feb 2006yeah this looks a little too floaty to me , try touse the anticiaption to add punch to your movemnts
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quinn paynter 356 posts17 Feb 2006Thanks for the crits guys. Well I've been playin with the animation timing and changed a few things around. I'll post an update once its alittle more completed, for more crits. Thanks agian ^^
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quinn paynter 356 posts23 Feb 2006Well here's as much as I managed to get done. Like any project id like to work on it more ^^ but thats the way it goes. You can get it from here :
http://www.iestyn.sydneycg.com/Quinn_Paynter.avi
Hope you like. Big thanks to Iestyn Rob for the Host. Thanks Buddy.
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