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Anticipation: Goul
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17 Feb 2006Well, i've made a first test tonight, and i've found it more difficult than what i was thinking first
check it here =>
Still need works i know, but time for the first check up
I'm bad in animation so crits will be roughly appreciated -
Echo 21 posts17 Feb 2006hmm i cant seem to view yours it says quicktime is unable to play missing something. and it wont update my quicktime for me... you wouldnt happen to have an alternate filetype would you? -
brijach 6 posts17 Feb 2006lol...funny andc looking good -
17 Feb 2006The way the ball stays on the top while it's already over the hole looks a bit unnatural to me (as far as gravity goes).
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17 Feb 2006Echo> I will made a avi version on the next update
brijach> Thx mate
Maria> yep you're right, it's disturbing, i think it's because the balls fall/stop/fall. I will try to fix that tonight -
20 Feb 2006ok here's the corrected one, with a little render to see what's going on with motion blur
Not perfect, but i think i'm done because i will not have time to spend on it this week. It was pretty fun to do -
Echo 21 posts20 Feb 2006that looks pretty cool just one crit would be the momentum in the jump seems a bit floaty with where the sphere drops. im not sure how to explain it properly though.
looks really good though -
20 Feb 2006Hey!
I like how snappy this looks! Really full of energy
I do think though that you might want to have him hang in the air a bit longer... it's a little hard to read... think of the old Wile E Coyote drops... remember how long he was in the air before he noticed? Maybe bot that long, but at least a few more frames
And his final jump; a double bounce like you have happening gives it a jerky, un-natural look... I would sugest having one continuous motion, one jump....
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21 Feb 2006Thx for feedback mates, i must admit your right, i will try to fix thats, but i don't think i will have time before next week end
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