Looking good so far J.
Sometimes difficult to visualise the in-betweens, but it seems to read pretty well (though I actually don't like the puffed out chest hehe) The best part for me is just before he says 'and when you get the money' because he's just about to put the sauce on, then has a pause and adds the next part of the dialogue almost as an after-thought... I like that... animating a 'thought'.
I'd make a little more of the "shifty" look at the start of the anim, and be aware that the COG stops dead towards the end and will need some shift of weight.
waiting for the updates