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BColbourn 2,323 posts
any critiques would be highly appreciated.
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iest_rob 1,671 posts
Woah! nice one Ridey! The materials on him are awsome! The anly crit i'd have is the thin balck line around him, it's a little 'square' if you could round it off a bit, and mabe make it a tad bit thicker - it'll be awsome! It would be aslo very cool, if you could make the eyes glow a bit. But otherwise, awsome stuff! Really good style.
-Iest
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hype 2,964 posts
wow, REALLY cool! nice blend of a semi-realistic material and a toon shader! can we expect an animation with this guy?
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Global 1,589 posts
Nice one Ridey... me likey a lot! Great mix of techniques.
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troubadour 207 posts
waaaayyyy coooollll...
glow for the eyes would be great as already said
but great mats and lighting
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zachm 1,230 posts
yeah man, one more vote for the glow on the eyes, and also, if it were to suit my taste, I would make the toon stroke heavier and give it more weight in certain places, And I don't know if you want to keep it really low poly, but more smooth on some of the geometry would help as I can see a bit of faceting. Other than those minimal crits, Looks good, can't wait to see more.
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g3org3 355 posts
I really like it. Did you use mentalray for the render? same critiques from me that the other people already said. Also I think you need to up the samples on your light solution and the samples on your metal shader. other than that its pretty darn sweet.
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BColbourn 2,323 posts
thanks for the crits guys. i'm gonna up the polys on most of the stuff, see if i can chagne the line thickness in some areas, and increases the sampling on the material and render.
ps: it was vray, not mental ray.
