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adam_kehoe 30 posts
hello everyone its been awhile. here is something new that i have worked on and want to put in my demo reel. Im going to go back in and rework the horns, eyes, some of the stubble and add tattoos and beeds or metal clips in the hair. I would like to hear any comments or questions you have so any C&C is more then welcome
thanks
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MikeWilson 638 posts
first thing that came to my head was, WAHHHHHHHAAAAA???
Looks cool, i would like to see the wireframe (i like to see how people model)
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Goul 246 posts
Really cool
One thing disturb me, he didn't have any eyelids...I think it should gain personality with some
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BColbourn 2,323 posts
holy god............the hair on him looks fantastic, the nose and horns look too glsosy though
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iest_rob 1,671 posts
Great work man! I really like te hair. Good job on the texture and the wrinkles, they look good. Nice one
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts
great work top notch but as goul said eye lids would be nice and for the ears cant there be any details to me sounds too flat for a character that has this much amount of rinkels but over all AUSOM WORK and would also love to see a wire frame
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Cameron 2,374 posts
Looks fantastic!
In some places the texture looks stretched, and the horn texture doesn't really suit the rest of the character but I do like it a lot!
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ALi 608 posts
Fantastic!
I really like hair. is it max or maya?
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troubadour 207 posts
nice char and really good hair...
the creature looses a bit through the eyes, don't know if they are anatomically correct (two spheres inside one another) or if it is just the texture of the iris, which seems a bit washed out...
if you just improve the eyes including the lids, you can take this funny thing a huge step further...
it's all in the eyes
keep up
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Global 1,589 posts
Nice - some freat details and lovely hair, but yes... it does loose it a little around the eyes. I think the texture itself id ok, but they look glassy rather than moist. REally needs lids too.
Texture is a little stretched out around the nose, but looks nice and wet hehe. Look forward to more updates!
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adam_kehoe 30 posts
hey everyone thanks for all the feed back so far. MikeWilson i will get a wire frame up here soon. I didnt even notice at first glance that i didnt give him eyelids kind of sliped my mind. i will be going back in and adding them, i agree with all of you that it will help out alot. hope to have some time here soon to go back in and make some more changes and get the new render posted.
again thanks for all the great feed back
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kilroy 787 posts
Holy big snout batman............swee stuff dude.
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love to animate this dude
Great job ,great modeling.
kilroy
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kilroy 787 posts
ohh I forgot............love the vane texture on the inside of the ear.
KILroY
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Howitzer 56 posts
Nice work Adam. You've managed to make it look real and cartoony at the same time too!
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adam_kehoe 30 posts
hey everyone sorry about taking this much time to get a wire frame posted but here they are. Im not that great at modeling so im not to happy with posting my wireframes but it will only help me get better i guess. I hope to have some time here when i finish some of my projects for school to make those changes on this guy so please do check back.
C&C is always more then welcome
thanks
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Richard 1,943 posts
very nice indeed, i second all the crits given here
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts
very nice wire frame and heavy nice details and all. i will get in a picky mode i hate triangels and i see only like 3 on the nose does hert just cause u said you want a very clean mesh. lol dont pay attention to a noob like me really great work i am totally watching this thread for update
