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audi a3 my first car model
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts27 Aug 2006hi every one i am so sorry for the delay of this model but i had some work to do for job interviews and all any way here is the car audi a3 and SPECIAL THANKS TO cameron and hype for your adivces on the wip of this project and comments on previous projects and i reviwed them all to come up with this result THOUGH personally i think this model sucks.
i am still reasearching on vray and i would love some links that teach that maybe couple of tutorials for transparent objects i cant figer almost anything till now
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts27 Aug 2006forgot the non smoothed wire soz
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27 Aug 2006Cool car, nicely done, nothing to crits about it
The render can be better tough, i like reflections, but the overall picture need to be more contrasted. You can enhance that by adding GI, a soft shadow solution or by adding an ambient occlusion pass.
Give it a better light setup too, and maybe, try to do something more interesting for the background than this grey plane/black background
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts27 Aug 2006thanks for your crit goul since you mentioned it can you link me to tutorials where they discuss issues like occulasion pass and gi cause i dont know one bit about them but not for this project for my couple of next projects since i will stick with modeling for couple of projects then i will move into character animation ANY WAY THANKS for comments waiting for you all people to crit and com
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts28 Aug 2006thanks goul for your great help and support
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28 Aug 2006nice job, i especially like that first wireframe
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts28 Aug 2006thanks corey i do too kinda neon effect but it wasnt done by intension that is a luck shot
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ALi 608 posts28 Aug 2006Welldone mate. It's very good for the first one. even for second and third.
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28 Aug 2006looks sweet ..........can I smash it now
Nice work mate.
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28 Aug 2006Wow dude nice work
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts29 Aug 2006thanks all for crits hope to hear more and kilroy i will send it to u if u want to smash it as u like
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31 Aug 2006Yeah man, that's quite a jump in quality from your last models you posted. Wherever you are learning this stuff, keep learning it, you'll be knowin-it-all in no time.
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