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Yet another interior...
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26 Aug 2005After seeing Weider's post on his maxwell interior test, I was inspired to make another interior. This was a quicky I started it this afternoon and its already ready for showing!
If anyone could help me with those strange artifacts where the walls meet at the ceiling, it would be most appreciated too!
Cheerios, Greg. -
27 Aug 2005I like this - quite an interesting lighting design you have, with the skylight and all, and it works pretty well.
Design wise I think you could take out one of the chairs to give it a bit more space - also arrange them so they are not totally in line with the glass coffee table (have them at angles to make it more inviting.)
I would also suggest adjusting the FOV of the camera as the perspetive skew on that cabinet and speaker (RHS) is a little too dramatic!
As for the artefacts - not sure, could be the renderer, may be something to do with the shadow bias on the lights though.
Overall I do like it though again it looks a bit plasticy and too bright (which is easily sorted post render) And it could do with just a splash of colour in there (if you are up for the challenge a nice plant would look cool
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27 Aug 2005*shudders at plant* Hey anything's possible!
The curtains are off because of the "attempted" hemming at the bottom - and yeah you're right - those chairs do clutter the scene. As for the FOV, anything higher It would look very skewed, anything lower and you can just about only see the Television without actually moving the camera- and in this scene, the camera is right against the wall, so any further and you'd see nothing lol!
hmm.. As for colour, I would have no idea which other colours to use - I ended up giving the walls a very very light tint of green so it gives a different shade when the skylight/direct light bounces off it - probably not visible though.
I've managed to get rid of those Artifacts (BTW I forgot that I fixed them up in PS in my first render, so really, you cant see the artifacts I was talking about in the first render
Cheers, Greg. -
28 Aug 2005Hey I think it's cool...very warm...nice color pallete you've chosen etc....
My only complaint is that it was very hard to see the glass table in the middle....in fact I didn't even notice it at first...I thought it was just a reflection on the floor -
28 Aug 2005Ivan - I showed this image to my dad and he said exactly the same thing - until i told him that there was a table there
I'm not sure how to fix it though - change its refractive colour..? not sure because glass is glass lol and you cant change it too much without making it NOT look like glass!
Cheers, Greg. -
30 Aug 2005which renderer are u using? maxwell too?
...gues not, u wouldnt be able to post twice in the same day
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