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Here's my work, Please offer some advice
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31 Aug 2005Ok, i recently started to make some minor thing for interiors...
this first piece is followed from a tutorial
These further images are adapted from the tutorial...
And a sofa...
that was meant to look like this...
i dunno, my mates have said they are ok...
can anyone help, or give advice.. all help is appreciated... -
31 Aug 2005The models don't look bad, I'm not really into the whole metal and perspex theme going on. But that's your choice.
What renderer are you using? The lighting could do with some increasing, and fixing.
As for the couch, it has the right general shape, but it does seam a way bit off. The couch in the photo isnt seperated into the cushions, and it is alot smoothers and bulges outwards in the mid back. Also the material seems reflective and too dark (as with all the other renders).
May I suggest the tutorial made by Terry at http://terryfera.onnovanbraam.com/ for creating a silk material and change the colour and roughness? -
31 Aug 2005Thank you, i am currelty using 3D studio max, and predominantly mental ray.. i wiill take a look at that tutorial.. thank you for your advice
after i have tried it out i will post my results. -
Suspect 21 posts31 Aug 2005yea i like them but the legs are looking kinda small on them chairs hehe.. also try and work on that sofa its still all kool tho..
nice 1 Idaeus -
01 Sep 2005Also....as a matter of practicality....the chairs don't exactly look too comfortable
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g3org3 355 posts01 Sep 2005For the chairs and table you may just want to use inches and feets as the units instead of generic. This may help the scale of the scene. (right now it looks like the chairs are futuristic kids throne chairs.) For the lighting I think you may need to up the final gather samples/change the radi of those photons. Also try adding some other lights so there will be more dominating shadows. Instead of just the occlusion from the skylight.
For the sofa it looks like the material is stretched over it. Press f1 and read up on "UVW Mapping"
Do some of the modelling tutorials that came with max to learn meshsmooth, and a few other things. -
03 Sep 2005thand tyson
and gearge i will try moddeling with inces and and feet.. may help...
Ta
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