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xsi_ben 1 posts
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Cameron 2,374 posts
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BColbourn 2,323 posts
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zachm 1,230 posts
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adam_kehoe 30 posts
I like what you have so far. I can picture a nice cartoony animation in this scene. The one thing that sticks out to me is the yellow over hang about the door. It just seems to bright. Maybe desaturate it a little bit to blend it in a little more. Also i would work on the side walk a little bit more with the texture.
For some reason it makes me think of Pj's projects the old claymation that was on tv for a little while before it was taken off the air. I not sure why but it does.
Keep up the good work want to see more.
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iest_rob 1,671 posts
Hey Ben, welcome to the forum. I like the scene, and i like your textures, very grundey. The only thing i'd work on a bit more is the lighting. The shadows are waay to soft and light for it to be in sunlight like that. But otherwise, good stuff!
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts
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hype 2,964 posts
looks like a miniature model! nice work! great texturing!
the thing that bugs me is it feels like its on a table, the way the sky comes all the way down to the road on the right side. needs something back there, or crop it off maybe. great scene, though. i second what some others have said, as well.
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syedamin7 46 posts
hey dude nice work... my only observation was that maybe the scales are a bit off.... or maybe its due to the angle. also the AC on one of the buildings isnt textured.
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BColbourn 2,323 posts
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ALi 608 posts
all notes above + great work man.
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