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Yet Another Animation
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts24 Sep 2006hi guys, yet another bigginer quality animation but i am slowly but defently getting better hope you like this and enjoy
LINK: http://mahmoudahmad.com/vids/finalObjectEnteraction.mov
C&C ARE VERY VERY WELCOMED -
24 Sep 2006I like the smooth impression from your animation, anyway i think thes poses are a bit rigid and unatural (the original position is quiete strange)
The hands seems sticked, you should play with fingers and add some secondary motion
Anyway, i'm not an expert of animation, i let the gurus of this forum complete my comment
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24 Sep 2006pretty good, man! there's little things here and there, but they're so minor that i don't know what they are! i'd be thrilled with myself if i had done this! good work!
i agree with Goul, some of the real top-notch guys will be able to guide you with better critiques! -
24 Sep 2006yeah not bad mahmoud.
its good to see you're applying secondary motion, although i feel some of it is a little exagerated, especially the hands when he's sitting down. and his movement is a bit unnatural, but you're surely improving, way to go!
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