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3D Still + Animation
Female Body - WIP
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05 Sep 2005Alright, I got up friday morning and had no classes so i decided to get some reference images and better my modeling skills. I wanted to post a copy here so I could get crits before I go into texturing her. Without further adue, here it is.
Hope you guys like it.
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g3org3 355 posts05 Sep 2005Alright Im not too great at anatomy but i do see a few things wrong with it right away. I looks like her hips are too high. Her face just looks totaly wrong right now, I cant see a good angle on her face to tell you what is exactly wrong but it almost looks like her eyes are too high or something. The back of her head looks a bit flat. Aswell as her back of her neck. Her breasts are too firm unless you are going to put cloths on her. ALso her breasts should be closer together. The knees and elbows neeed some work. Just look at your own to get a better understanding. THe place where the colar bone is supposed to be looks very odd. It kind looks like there colar bones but the are connected to her throat kinda. Under her breast area looks like there might be a little mesh error or something. Her stomach looks quite weird. Ill draw over if i have more time tonight. Her Legs and arms would look better if you rounded them out abit more and her shoulder blades on her back could use a little work.
Great start. I don't know if you have done it or not but check out the joan of arc tutorial at http://3dtotal.com/ it will help a lot. Good luck on the rest of it
If i sound harsh in the reply i am trying not too, just that i has been a long day at work and people were making me really annoyed. -
05 Sep 2005haha its alright i like these type of comments cuz then my next version will the that much better
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05 Sep 2005hey! first off, i couldn't do this kind of thing... i'm no 3d artist. but i can give you the anatomical side of it the way i would treat a drawing!
first, you should understand that to duplicate the human form is rediculously difficult... you see people evry day, so, you can't really fudge something withought having it get noticed.
another thing, if you DO want to duplicate the human form, i would suggest checking out any good anatomy for artist books... you should try and understand what's underneath the skin, so that you can convincingly lay down the skin on top of the exisiting skeleton... like your knees... you have a bone there, the patella, which is pretty prominent on anyone.. but you forgot to include it all together!
as for the neck, put 2 fingers in your own "pit of the neck".. there's a hole there where the 2 clavicles connect to your sternum.
another thing, is remember the rib cage, and the pelvis. 2 huge bone collections that everyone has... describe these masses, and it'll look 10 times more human
i hope this isnt too much... i could go on and on... ( i love anatomy study)
you were pretty close on your latissimus dorsi though!:D
geese i love these happy face icons ! -
g3org3 355 posts05 Sep 2005OK well. I cant really reply that much atm because i am not in the right state of mind but i will try my best. I can see the pictures that i couldn't see before and there looks like ther might be soem mesh errors in a few places. If you can post a wire it would probaly help everyone help you a lot more. ANd im in a better mood now. I say before you texture this you should probaly restart the entire model again after you finish this one. WHen you do this it will help you a lot from what you learned from this model. So dont be afraid to redo it. I do it all the times.. granted im not very talented at 3d. BUt if you post a wire by the time i go to work i will try my best to help you out as much as i can
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06 Sep 2005Hi, thanks for all the crits guys!
how do I render with wireframe though? I will post my corrections asap -
06 Sep 2005Alright my changes done. I literally took everyhting that you guys said, made a list in notebad, and checked em off when i thought i was complete with the tuning. In any case, here are the updated model versions
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06 Sep 2005ok im no atonamist but.. the eyescould be a little closer together, and pehaps smaller.. and the bum is a little large , i should know.. i havce spent the last 3 -4 hours feeling my gf's ... a slight resize of the head to make it a little small er would be good.
well thatas my 2 cents on the situaltion.. hope i helped..
and to render in wires you need to select wireframe in the material editor.
if this is a helpfl post please say ... because then i will know ...
good luck
ciao -
06 Sep 2005Well the part about feeling your girlfriends bottom wasn't too helpful...
But the rest was ok 
Back on topic - Dark... are you using reference material? If so, can you post it with the next update so we can compare. If you are not using reference material - why not?
It seems to me that the overall propotions are not right - the arms are too short IMO for one thing and the head (although it looks quite large is probably off because of the length and shape of the neck... which is very masculine at the moment)
Plenty of reference out there (and no, I don't mean the X-rated material that the internet became popular for!) Check out this thread
BTW you can also get a wireframe render by going to the render dialogue and in one of the tabs (I forget which one) you can click 'force wireframe' -
15 Sep 2005ohkay, third times the charm. hehe
here we go with the fresh renders of this woman.
As always, crits and comments are good for me ^_^
If i get everyone's blessing, I think i will be about ready to texture her.
So without further adue, here it is:
Wireframe to come soon
till then, cheers -
15 Sep 2005which reference are u using?
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16 Sep 2005Yep - a reference image is needed here for comparison. I can see the improvement, but I can't see the goal as yet. Just be careful of putting in too much detail at this stage (as I still thing the proportions need looking at)
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16 Sep 2005I am using reference images from 3d.sk. i dont have the cash to pay for a subscription, i used there free samples for references. so alot of eyeballing on my behalf had to be done the ones that i used were the reference models named "simona" for the body and the other one that was named "full_figure###"
here is the link for the free samples that i used
Hope this helps. also, i have a wireframe for review as well.
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19 Sep 2005Texturing Test
This was done using sss and mental ray renderer.
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19 Sep 2005Can you post a wire? It looks like it needs a lot of work....
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