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WIP animation : plane crash.
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20 Sep 2005hell guys,
first post in this forum.this is really gr8 forum i found myself.
ok..here is something i m messing up these days.
i m creating plane crash animation based on "ethopian plane crash".
here is the first shot of animation.there will be two shots in whole animation.
as u can see plane is burning with afterburn particles and it;s gonna be crashed in next second shot.
also there is no reflection of afterburn;s particles in the water.there will come sea foam and splashes.(well right now messing up with it.but didn;t get desired result.)
this is waht i got so far.plz comments and crits r welcome.
and sorry for my bad english.
DOwnload : http://jigu.actkid.com/output1_color.avi (858 KB) -
20 Sep 2005Hey jigu...welcome to the forums here
Here are some things I'd suggest for your animation
-Although the water looks quite nice right now....I think it's rippling a bit too fast
-It would be nice if you could have the water directly under the plane get all splashy and ripply....the wind force of the plane would definitely mix up the water underneath of it more than it is now
-Your afterburn particle size is waaaay too uniform, and the noise size is too low....you'll want the smoke to be a bit more wispy too
-Try adjusting the particle-age opacity of your particles so that they fade into existence for the first few frames of their age. Right now the fire just kinda pops into place at each frame (know what I mean?)
Overall it's a cool looking scene though....it'll be nice to see how this turns out
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20 Sep 2005I agree with what tyson said.
The afterburn is way to uniform, and dense
Also, the plane movement is too slow and it looks like It turns before it hits, which doesn't look possible.
Looking forward to seeing what you do with this. -
21 Sep 2005yes guys!!
i m still not happy with this.this needs a lot of work.
i will post some updates soon.
yes i myself was also feeling a plane motion a little slow.
i m thinking to make again whole animation from scratch.
and also trying to learn some composition work with this animation.(i mean doing multipass rendering like diffuse ,shadow,occlusion etc layer and compositing them together.)
well here is the original plane crash in the sea.
http://www.cnn.com/WORLD/9611/26/comoro ... .14sec.mov
plz stay tuned with this.
i may be post updates in a week.(coz got some other works to do) -
21 Sep 2005the scene itself looks absolutely gorgeous
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