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XBOX - W.I.P
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7thTheory 24 posts22 Oct 2005i wanted to model something so i went for an xbox
heres what i have so far with normal materials applied.
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22 Oct 2005lookin good so far, next make the 360
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7thTheory 24 posts23 Oct 2005little update
ive done some re-scaling to the xbox and ive added in the controller ports
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Toni 65 posts23 Oct 2005 -
23 Oct 2005
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7thTheory 24 posts23 Oct 2005
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7thTheory 24 posts23 Oct 2005modeling is finished.
just gotta get some better lighting on it then it should look more realistic
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7thTheory 24 posts24 Oct 2005here is my final render
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24 Oct 2005looks good, seems a little wide...
i thing you should decrease the reflection falloff on the front panel.. sure its reflective... but not that reflective...
i should know i have 2 sittin in front of me...
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24 Oct 2005erm.....that's the final? i'd suggest accentuating the front of it in photoshop, adding some contrast and depth to the image. right now it seems kinda flat.
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g3org3 355 posts24 Oct 2005. Also the 'X' part of the box (not sure what else to call it but it is basically like a big x over the entire thing) Well that should atleast of somesort of bump map on it. Looking at mine it is bumpy. For the rest of it add a falloff to the reflection part of it and make it a bit less reflective. THe lighting needs some improvement. It almost looks like you just added a skylight or something. Look up three point lighting to get the basics. THe circle thing on the top should be almost in an indent. (well atleast mine is). THe ridges on the side are to constant. They start out thick near the centre and get thinner as they move away. Also they are shorter then are higher. (It's hard to explain.)
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santudo 9 posts24 Oct 2005Check out the reflections, and make sure you add fresnel to your shader to achieve the plastic look of the box and the green logo on top, otherwise surfaces will look like a mirror like the floor. You also need to lit the scene a bit. Other than that, the modelling its looking good!
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7thTheory 24 posts25 Oct 2005im only a beginner you know so dont go hard on me
as a new user of 3DSM (1 1/2 months experiance) i have yet to learn new things so from what i already know i used.
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Adam Chase 72 posts25 Oct 2005there not being hard on you its called giving advice.. and i agree with te thigns they said
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Toni 65 posts25 Oct 2005
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