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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts
Hi everyone, Miss me?!, well i do miss you, any way been busy because of my job had no time to do any work today i had a 15min break so i decided to reconnect with you guys enjoy and give your criticisms about the pose in particular.
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JayG 1,164 posts
WB!
Two major things that will make your pose way better that I can see.
#1 - Silhouette!
If you were to look at your pose in a silhouette it would be tough to figure out what's going on. His right leg is half missing and his right arm is covered up by the sword. Play with either the camera angle or the position of the right foot to show at least part of his lower leg. With his arm, you could have his elbow coming out past the sword on screen left or something, but you should really try to show his arm a lot more somehow. Create some negative space in between the sword and the arm to make a strong silhouette.
#2 - Twinning!
Both his legs and feet are doing the exact same thing just opposite of each other. Makes the pose very static. However if you can somehow show his right lower leg and move it out or rotated a bit this will probably eliminate the twinning in his legs.
I just spent like only 1 minute on this but this is where i'd start with changes I think. Try for a line of action somewhere too.
Looking good man, and welcome back.
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Global 1,589 posts
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zachm 1,230 posts
wow man, yeah. Great crit. I agree completely. They must be feeding you guys good stuff there.
-Z
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iest_rob 1,671 posts
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ivanisavich 4,196 posts
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts
MY DAD WONT PAY FOR MY AM >< he wants to pay over 30thousand pounds just to get my masters degree in 3d animation in London he just wont listen
JAY MA MAN THANKS
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JayG 1,164 posts
eeeeek do they even have a masters for 3d animation? Get a masters in something so you can rich like philosophy then pay for AM yourself =P
Or let him read the interviews with all the guys from Pixar and every other studio that says they don't care one bit if you have a degree, it's all about teh skillz!
I'm glad the crit was good, it's nice when there's actually something I can help with around here =)
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Richard 1,943 posts
