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"Law enforcement" Contest at 3ddart.org
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Payne 25 posts11 Jun 2007Hallo alle zusammen,
Hello everybody, some time ago I started a thread in "the factory" about my "Law Enforcement" - contest project. The contest ends in three weeks, so I would be very pleased to get some feedback! For older images please have a look at . Here is my latest image:
Bigger version:
Wireframe:
Software: Realsoft 3d
Artist: Jan Schmitz
Contest theme: Law enforcement
Contest duration: three months
Contest site:
Thanks in advance!
Liebe Gr??e,
Payne -
Payne 25 posts16 Jun 2007why does nobody comment on my new image? did I do something wrong?
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d4rk3lf 109 posts16 Jun 2007Well... you-ve got a nice picture there, that's for shoore.
But... something is... hmm... it's just a feel that something don't fit there.
Maybe it's a material on the main gun. I think it's to reflective. I sugest you to make something like ruff coroved, very low intense reflection over the bump.
I don't like that yellow type of atmosphere (but that's just my personal taste, so don't consider this) with this too yellow fog. Maybe if you try redish sunset?
And yes... acourding that this is sunset, covered with clouds and fog, and stuff, I think that your shadows should be much blured.
Also, is the position of the light on the right place? I ask that, becouse it seems to me that the shadows are maybe shorter then they should be.
Sorry for nitpiking, but you ask it.
I suggest you to add a bunch of little stuff that is easy to model, for the enviorontment (rocks, barrels, birds at the sky), also a nice DOF would be good.
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Payne 25 posts16 Jun 2007many thanks for your answer! I'll try to realize your ideas!
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20 Jun 2007
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Payne 25 posts29 Jun 2007Here is the final version, I hope you like it
the wireframe rendering:
cheers,
Jan -
30 Jun 2007i love it, but still agree with Tyson that the edges on the gun cylinders need beveled. Those cylinders that are holding the 6 gun barrels in formation. Their edges just look CG and razor sharp. Maybe its not too big a deal if this is a model for a game, but it jumps out at me.
Still, great job, especially with the textures!
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