My only crit is to maybe give him more time to settle from the flip, he kinda snaps into place.
DanGarnett
4 posts
04 Sep 2007
yoo, Jay. Looks nice so far!
I would exaggerate it a lot more though. from f22-23 his hips hardly move vertically at all, bring him up a lot higher on f23. Then he's going to need to be a lot higher on f26
And watch the arcs on his hands from f23-26, they sorta jerk around a bit
The end looks nice, I would just add some more overlap in the spine/neck/ and head from f33-41
and maybe add a few more frames when he lands to show more weight, he recovers really fast for just doing a backflip.
Work on those and this will be beautiful!