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njdorn 34 posts31 Oct 2007
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Claymation 600 posts06 Nov 2007Hey nate, It's looking a lot better! I still really like that last line. The spine movements seem a lot more natural.
Three things I noticed:
-The head/neck still seem to move around way too much, not just rotating but actually moving down into the shoulders still. I would try to tone it down even more, it really stands out to me.
-There's a couple spots where the hands stop completely, they should always be moving just a little bit.
- Some of the lip sync could sync up a little bitter, especially the ends of phrases. -
njdorn 34 posts15 Nov 2007I just wanted to say thanks for the feedback and everything. I made many more adjustments since then and rendered another version. I hope everyone likes it.
http://nate.animateharder.com/movies/TBL%20FINAL.mov
Thanks again
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