Gallery + Critique

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Richard
1,943 posts

02 May 2008
Here it is!

http://www.richardadenot.com/simplycg/R ... 08Reel.mov

As usual, feel free to say anything!
BColbourn
2,323 posts

02 May 2008
not really feelin' the music, especially mixed in with the audio at the end. otherwise it seems pretty solid, the legs running from one platform to another could probably be cut tho, it feels a bit floaty.
diemacht
1,045 posts

02 May 2008
nice but if you can try to render the last scene in high res and try to make a beat stop.
like the last video enters righ befor a beat starts but you mute the music and you hear the voices talking than the punchline and then the music starts again from the cuttet beat i think that way it would be more effective. and when the music begins you could write your personal info there and maybe even make a char you did lean against it (a simple still actually )
troubadour
207 posts

02 May 2008
Hi Rich,

nice reel you got there, although i dont really know if to show the firestuff is the best choice...
i mean its good, but it could be better (hope you dont get me wrong), using tools of these days like krakatoa or fume
why not showing kind of a comp-breakdown of your entryway instead, which you made from a 2d concept...
if i remember right, that was a really strong piece of you...

anyway ...love the hand throwing the ball in the bucket