I like the animation and the characters, but it seems as though your story lines are fading. Very nice to look at and watch, but not too much of a story.
actually, i have made three seperate shorts with three separate plots :O one of them is over 10 minutes long (which means that i beat tyson to it!!) :O :O
njdorn
34 posts
18 Jul 2008
That's awesome dude,
It's got a cool surreal undertone to it. Would love to see more.