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Another roboball
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BenCole 3 posts28 Jul 2008Thanks for the great tut, tyson. Here is my product after following tyson's workshop:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GdbapI2tHSU
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Gotmilk 228 posts28 Jul 2008Hello. I think that your animation turned out very well. You could try to make your ball more heavier and agile. And maybe adding a little more secondary animation. (like eye patch bouncing up and down) I am no animation master. Just giving my perspective of things that pulled me out of the "animation illusion"
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts29 Jul 2008i like ur texture -
ALi 608 posts29 Jul 2008Very cool animation. The only point about it I can say is that you may work more on walking and probably add more keys. In some points it looks sliding, not walking. btw, really great animation. almost love it!
And welcome to forums mate! hope to hear more from you. 
UPDATE: watched it more times. forgot about my point about walking. my mistake.
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BenCole 3 posts29 Jul 2008hey thanks guys. yea i likd how the texture turned out too. I think the heavier/more agile comment is totally right, that's the biggest dif i can spot when watching tyson's
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30 Jul 2008wow that did turn out nice. yeah a bit more weight to the ball would do nice to the animation.
great job mate. -
01 Aug 2008Yep same comment, the ball is lacking weight at the moment. Good stuff though, keep at it.
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d4rk3lf 109 posts01 Aug 2008I like this animation.
My bigest critic is the fact that you tryed to mimic exactly the same animation (movement of the robot) like Tyson did.
I think you shoud put your own ideas, and try to bring them out through this character.
Not to mention that copying animation is much harder (at least for me) then creating something new. -
BenCole 3 posts01 Aug 2008
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