Gallery + Critique

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mike55449
1 posts

02 Sep 2008
Hey all, just found out about this site and joined it tonight, looks like fun!

Anyways, I wanted to show you all my first full 3d animation I made at school. I'm about 9 months into 3D now and am really enjoying every part of it (except for the crashing and glitching of course).

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3weGFB5xJYs

Let me know what you think.
mahmoudnahmad
1,159 posts

02 Sep 2008
not bad for a starter, maybe it would look better if more anticipation is added just my opinion don't know if its right or wrong.
BColbourn
2,323 posts

03 Sep 2008
hey yeah, definitely not bad for starting out. one thing i particularly liked was the timing on the cut where he throws the lowmax guy out the window.
whaaabamb
615 posts

04 Sep 2008
Hhaha thats pretty good man!

i especially like the quick shot a about :27 of they guy gasping great motion there.

I do agree with the anticipation comment as well
rrateme95
262 posts

04 Sep 2008
For your first full animation thats quite good!I liked the bit where he gets thrown out the window