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Gallery + Critique
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3D Still + Animation
Juicebox
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13 Dec 2008Hey guys, just finished up an animation I did last week for practice.
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d4rk3lf 109 posts13 Dec 2008Hey man, this looks good.
I really like how you set up a lights in your scene.
As for the animation, I think it's good, but in some places it should be more... hmmm... relaxed, if you know what I mean. At some places it seems that Juicebox is stick to the ground (a small jumping-steps in order to retreave stability could fix this). I think also that the jump before the wall should be stronger, and tumble of the Juisebox at the end faster.
That's just a few points.
How did you do that very nice SSS material on the trees?
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13 Dec 2008well that looks very nice man! i love the animation style you got going there, and such a cool environment too (i love that red ramp behind it)
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Wiz 36 posts14 Dec 2008really nice stuff Ben
I find the shader glitches a bit too distracting
when he squashes and so on.. I guess it has something to do with the depth
changing, maybe you can animate the depth values to make sure you have consistency?
Other then that it looks lovely, nice childish feel to it with all the vibrant
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15 Dec 2008I really like it!
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16 Dec 2008thanks guys, wiz now that you mention it, the material popping is pretty distracting. Gonna hafta wait to fix that until I have some time, so this render will have to do for now
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16 Dec 2008wow nice animation and nice mood, smooth rendering
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