Pavel Konstatinov?
Your name sound very familiar to me.
Maybe I have wached some of your tutorials (if you done any).
Anyway, the add looks great!
That's very nice (and advanced) work with particles, and lightning efects are great, and the sky effects are just briliant.
I like this sort of dark atmosphere, and music feets well too.
My (small) objection:
- You have some flick somewhere betwen 2nd and the 3th second. The whole scene start too look a little darker.
- Though I think camera work is very nice, from 25 second you have a 3 shots of camera rotating around mobile phone, and in all 3 shots camera is rotating around object in clockwise way (from left to right). In my humble opinion this can be a huge mistake, and I think it would be much better if you make second shot have the camera goes in contra direction (contra clockwise) around the phone. The same camera movement can confuse the audince, and it's always better that you go contra in another shot, no matter if the zoom is, or pan, or rotating cammera.
- Mobile phones have a bit to strong reflections, perhaps.
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Anyway, I am very intersted to hear how did you make clouds looks so nice (if you wanna share)? Is that afterburn? That sun shining through the clouds is also very nice. Acctualy, I would be happiest if you could write (or record video) of a complete tutorial for the animated sky and particle effects.
Keep it up.