Gallery + Critique

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acrouch
19 posts

11 Jul 2009
Hi everybody!

Here's my latest animation. I'll be adding a sound track later, but right now I want to make sure everything looks right and reads well.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zmovw1wD ... annel_page

Any comments, critiques, etc. are greatly appreciated!

Alex
BColbourn
2,323 posts

16 Jul 2009
I think obi moom kenobi would be better than obi wan moom
acrouch
19 posts

16 Jul 2009
Ha ha! Yeah, I think you're right!
acrouch
19 posts

29 Jul 2009
Here's the final version, pending any last minute changes:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b7cqftMiTHE

Thanks for watching!
BColbourn
2,323 posts

29 Jul 2009
the new version definitely looks better, but is he supposed to look like they're pretending to fight? the guy on the right has a definite lack of passion for the amount of movement he's doing.
acrouch
19 posts

29 Jul 2009
Thanks!

The intent was to have the blue guy fight in a frantic, exuberant way as a young and inexperienced Jedi might fight, and to contrast that with the red guy who's bored and doesn't feel particularly challenged. If there's anything confusing about the animation as it is, I'd be grateful to receive any feedback about how to make things clearer!