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Ugly as...
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07 Mar 2006Next clip! Its just a 1st rough pass to get most of the poses and timing. Just shoot away!
http://www.aminator.net/Animation/UglyWIP.mov
P.S - WARNING!!! Strong language! -
07 Mar 2006Hehe, great start, can't wait to see it finished...
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dami 62 posts07 Mar 2006yo dood,nice stuff.keep it up.
i like the part where he says "really look at me"
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07 Mar 2006lol...i enjoyed that..keep us posted
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Chrissum 1 posts07 Mar 2006Haha, I really enjoyed that and whhat a funny little skit too, is it from a movie or something?
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07 Mar 2006Thanks for the feedback guys! Just realized there are some things I need to fix for this clip. Will keep updating!
Chrissum, its from the movie "40 year old virgin"
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08 Mar 2006Cool start, look forward for the next!
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13 Mar 2006Reduced some of the gestures of the yellow man. Also did some refining
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14 Mar 2006Hey man,
Some really nice motion in this clip. I like a lot of the subtelties you've added and most of the acting is clear.
Here's a comment:
-from "really look at me" to "get with women" the yellow guy doesn't take his eyes off the guy on the right. In real life, that much of a staring while talking to someone (especially seeing how close they are) would be REALLY creepy.....I'd say maybe break up his gaze a bit by having him look at something else....look forward, or maybe down at the table or even just at different areas of the blue guy's face (right now his pupils seem locked). -
14 Mar 2006
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16 Mar 2006Looks great! congrats!
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17 Mar 2006
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17 Mar 2006Hey I like this a lot (Maybe it's my kind of humour...) Nice poses and I love the secondary action (the guy rubbing the glass etc)
One slight thing from me is just a matter of timing. Like when the blue guy puts the glass down and begins his dialogue - I think the dialogue kicks in way too soon after that main action. Having said that though most of the timing and transitions between poses is spot on. The "really look at me" part is perfect. -
18 Mar 2006Thanks for the feedback Global
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20 Mar 2006very nice '
love this work.
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?@m 41 posts20 Mar 2006I love it! Great! -
20 Mar 2006Hehe Thanks guys
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