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Pull!!
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16 Mar 2006Hey all...
Here's an animation I just finished as a practice in weight and position shifts, etc. Any and all critiques are welcome! Thanks for looking...
http://toddkelley.com/htm/cg/pull/cg_pull.htm
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17 Mar 2006haha i love it, right off the bat i can't see any flaws, all the motion seems very fluent and lifelike
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17 Mar 2006[quote="Cameron"]Is this your own rig? are you using something like CAT?
Very fluid movements and well executed.[/quote]
Right on. It's a modified CAT Rig that I picked up somewhere, perhaps it came with the package...can't remember.
Thanks for the comments.
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17 Mar 2006Oooh, very nice indeed... and as a test of weight and position shifts I'd say this was pretty successful!
There were just a couple of transitions that I wasn't too sure about - I think it was the second shift of weight, when he drops his head right down and then looses his footing and nearly drops. Maybe it is the choice of pose but I think it was more the timing (the head seems to snap down too quickly and there was jusy not quite enough anticipation of the foot slip and drop)
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17 Mar 2006Hey...thanks Global! Your comments are greatly appreciated.
I?m still making some tweaks to this animation...so tomorrow I?ll take a look at the points you mentioned.
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20 Mar 2006Just made a couple of slight adjustments to the ending...
Thanks for the suggestions Global, I retouched a little of the pose where his head dropped down too fast...
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20 Mar 2006Its better
Just one thing I realized is that when he pulls hard on the ring the last time, he seems to be staggering too much and in a uniform manner. You might wanna reduce the staggering and vary it a bit. Other than that nicky picky thing, its almost perfect
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21 Mar 2006Thanks 3dcqa...I think you're right about the stagger/shake thing. I'll look into it when i get a chance.
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