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Gallery + Critique
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3D Still + Animation
Perfeito - Short Film
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25 Jul 2009Hi , I this is my last short.
Hope you like it
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25 Jul 2009Quite impressive man, nice work. I definitely understood the story.
You looking for critiques and such?
Did you model and rig the characters and do all the 3D yourself? -
27 Jul 2009Hi JayG. Feel free to criticize the work .
I wont change it , but it wont kill me to think about something I missed .
I known I missed alot of stuff , but I really try to make it enough and Finish it ehehe. If I look too much for perfection , I would be the character of the short.
So this is my limit at 2009 to make a short film and to be relaxed and enjoy making it.
I created the history and all the visual elements , concept , rigging , modeling , animation , etc. And some friends made the sound for me.
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maxspider 48 posts27 Jul 2009how beautiful ... I liked that story and animation Bartok ...
the camera angles are so strong, especially the one which go foreword and back with the hammer ...
a tiny comment ... I guess it would be better if the shot of his woody-girl (on the first time) came after he dropped his tools ... so you will get the viewer attention to know what did he made ... my opinion anyway ^_^ -
02 Aug 2009maxspider - Hi , i tryed that sequence in many different ways, and the one I choose was the one I found was better , because I wanted it to appear kind of surprising eheheh. Anyway thanks for the crit.
Cya -
02 Aug 2009Hey Bartok!
I really enjoyed that, loved the concept and you've managed to pull it off really nicely. Everything, in my opinion, fits together nicely. Love the style of the character, the rendering, and the music was just right. I've not got any crits I'm afraid - just congrats a nice job! -
04 Aug 2009wow dude............ the best thing I have seen in a long time....thanks
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14 Aug 2009Beautiful film! Great concept. Really enjoyed it. I think the staging and camerawork was done to great effect.
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15 Aug 2009Very nice indeed! Great feel and atmosphere, really nicely lit. The music and creaky wooden sound effects really add to the piece too. Congrats man, something to be very proud of! Are you sending this out to film festivals?
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16 Sep 2009Hi guys, thanks for the words.
And yes im sending it to all the festivals I known.
If u can recomend me some I would apreciate it.
Cya
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