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Gallery + Critique
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3D Still + Animation
1 day project
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Glenx2 15 posts06 Apr 2006This is a quick project that I did in about 20 hours from concept to finish, I am trying to speed up my work flow so let me know what you guys think, most appreciated. Oh yeah he is wood. more of a dummy than a robot.Link Below
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06 Apr 2006thats a very interesting clip i like the use of particles , camera shake etc. but i tihnk the explosion at the end is a bit exagerated you should have bigger chunks along with some whole piece (i.e arms , legs etc.) .
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flashmasterfong 238 posts06 Apr 2006Good animation, but the exploision at the end ruined it. -
06 Apr 2006Very nicely done.
I agree the explosion at the end could have been done better. With all that smoke there had to be something producing it that would cause a volumetric explosion, not just debri.
The smoke coming out the back isn't always aligned to the exhausty thing, looks like it can't keep up to the animation.
Also, the particle size should get bigger towards the end of the smoke's life. It will get rid of that small round blotty effect as it dies off. Also when he slams into the ground, and the smoke goes up, you can see that the particles are square. kind of odd
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Glenx2 15 posts06 Apr 2006I used facing particles for it, at the time I was very new to particles, and never went back to fix it.
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06 Apr 2006Not bad. I agree with the others on the fx, but if you are going purely for animation, then you dont have to worry too much about them. Maybe just fix the explosion and particles a bit.
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07 Apr 2006ooh i really like it. the smoke goes well and i agree with preevious comments about the end. what i really liekd is the back ground thing with the dots and stuff, really unique.
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flashmasterfong 238 posts07 Apr 2006Yes, the smoke was very nicely done.
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