Gallery + Critique

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David Holy
302 posts

17 Apr 2006
Hallo, havent posted anything in the last weeks. Here are some simple commercial artworks. They are used for a flashminigame for a customer as the start and gameoverscreen.

http://holysoft.de/data/Study/StartScreen.jpg

http://holysoft.de/data/Study/GameOverScreen.jpg

Its nothing really special and i could have done really much more here, putting more effort in it, but now i am satisfied for only some hours tweaking materialeditor, scenesetting and modelling.

But in case you have critics, who can improve the whole stuff (and that quick , say it
flashmasterfong
238 posts

17 Apr 2006
Wow, very nice. I really like that blood cell.
troubadour
207 posts

17 Apr 2006
very good, david, i like it...
would be nice if the tunnel (vein) fades into darkness the more far it is away to get more deepness...
could be tricky with some selfillumated mats which i guess you used here...
try it with an omni with a negative value, could work here and some fog set to exponantial if rendertimes allow this...

anyway, nice microskopic look