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Blade
26 posts

26 Apr 2006
Hey everyone, im gonna be posting some of the things im doing for my final major project which is creating a 3 minuite trailer for a made up video game and i would appreciate it if you wouldnt mind giving some possative feedback when i put up new stuff :) atm im just gonna upload my starting text which will bascially show what i aim to do in the trailer.
Cameron
2,374 posts

28 Apr 2006
I guess its good for a game trailer. I just don't understand the text. A "betting" game?
Franklyn
553 posts

28 Apr 2006
Betting game:any behavior involving risking money or valuables (making a wager or placing a stake) on the outcome of a game, contest, or other event in which the outcome of that activity depends partially or totally upon chance or upon one's ability to do something.

interesting intro i just think that the scrolling text is a bit hard to read. games usually just fade in and fade out their text.
Cameron
2,374 posts

28 Apr 2006
yeah I know what a betting game is, but I dont see how it relates to the rest of the text.
Blade
26 posts

28 Apr 2006
well ive tried to word it so it makes sense but it has to finsih about 20-21 seconds, as thats when the song ive chosen kicks in. So im sorry if its a little fast, although if its full screen its alot easier to read.