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s0nkite 41 posts
Well while working on it i had a great feeling but now i dont like it
the inspiration came from Dusso! i was working 5 hours on it
Its definately my best piece so far but as i said i dont like it :/
learned a lot on the proccess though and thats great
comments welcome!
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JayG 1,164 posts
Looks great S0n, the only thing that caught my eye was the moon or whatever that is really contrasts against the dark sky in he back. Also there is a white spot underneath it which doesn't really read clearly. Reflection?
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zachm 1,230 posts
Hey man, good work, Not bad for 5 hours, it'd be cool to see what you started with vs the final. A couple things jump out at me at a quick glance, first off, the clouds are receiving light from some other source than the moon, right now they're lit from the left, and they'd be getting illuminated almost as if through a tunnel if the moon was right there. And second, I am looking at the composition, and wondering, where are those stairs going? I mean, it's not bad to have stairs leading to nothing, but I think it would make the painting more dynamic if you could see where the road leads to in the midground or something. like that would be the point where the character is revealed to his destination or something. I like the feel of this since it is a big vista, indicting of an establishing shot. Other than those things, I think it's good so far, good atmosphere, and good mood.
-Z
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s0nkite 41 posts
thanks guys, i agree with what you say, that white reflection is a lake(or in mind)
i m new to matte painting i trying hope to make something better soon
cheers
